Nowadays travellers are putting of or even cancelling their planned trips as a result of the decrease of their financial situation. The travel agencies are noticing that fewer bookings are being made for the upcoming winter season due to the crash of the stock- and housing market. Experts predict that this decline will not recover quickly,because some travellers were financing their trips with the value rise of their houses. The majority of travellers prefer the summer holiday above the winter holiday so especially the number of skiing holidays will drop.
Wouter Heynderickx
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Nowadays [add a comma here] travellers are putting of [off] or even cancelling their planned trips as a result of the decrease of their financial situation. The travel agencies are noticing that fewer bookings are being made for the upcoming winter season due to the crash of the stock- [no hyphen here] and housing market. Experts predict that this decline will not recover [declines don't recover, sales can] quickly,because some travellers were financing their trips with the value rise of their houses. The majority of travellers prefer the summer holiday above [prefer over] the winter holiday so especially the number of skiing holidays will drop.
good flow, some word choice issues
olaf
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