Can the government help out the financial sectors?
The last few weeks and months, the crises in the financial sector have already been influencing the whole world. But the American and the European governments have been trying to recover the financials sectors by taking some crucial decisions. Thanks to those decisions the grants in
Mathias Heyse
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The [better: these] last few weeks and months, the crises in the financial sector have already been influencing the whole world. But the American and the European governments have been trying to recover [to help the financial sector recover]the financials sectors by taking some crucial decisions. Thanks to those decisions [add a comma here] the grants in America already started to increase again and both the Dow Jones and Nasdaq raised [rose] by 8 percent in just one trade day. But in Europe 15 state leaders of the euro zone decided to make some capital injections in the most important banks only a few days ago and now the governments are still hoping that the bank shares will follow the American example and will start to increase too.
Mind the difference between rise and raise; mind word order
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